You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left come important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter1. Say where you think you left the papers2. Explain why they are so im

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left come important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter1. Say where you think you left the papers2. Explain why they are so important.

To the manager,
Sheraton Hotel
58, Brigham road
London - 5684

Re - Requisition for blue file left at room No. 21

Dear Sir,
It was pleasure & memorable arrangement you did at your hotel. Our company higher authorities really appreciated the organizing plan set by hotel service department. i wish we will be conducting more such events at your premises.

I would like to bring your attention on recovery of my blue file left by me at Room No. 21. It has golden strip at edge of folder. It will be easily recognized by identifying letter ABC embarked on surface of file. I believe you can ask room assistant to check drawer of table which is having night lamp & flower vase above. the mentioned file is very crucial as it has company secret information & don't want it should get into wrong hands.

I am sincere request kindly keep it at your reception desk if found & same will be collected by me during evening hours by showing my identification proof. I would be grateful towards your post service delight. Please reply on this mail or ring me on (555)5498756.

Warm Regards,
Jack
29 avenue street
Hounslow 4587

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... file left at room No. 21 Dear Sir, It was pleasure & memorable arrangement ...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...g plan set by hotel service department. i wish we will be conducting more such ev...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g plan set by hotel service department. i wish we will be conducting more such ev...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing more such events at your premises. I would like to bring you...
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Line 11, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... having night lamp & flower vase above. the mentioned file is very crucial as it ha...
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Line 11, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... as it has company secret information & dont want it should get into wrong hands. ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... want it should get into wrong hands. I am sincere request kindl...
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Line 13, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce delight. Please reply on this mail or ring me on 5555498756. Warm Regards, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86082474227 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63984374538 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731958762887 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5932347564 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205433499759 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573933262328 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673202255653 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115981900945 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662264383142 0.0580467560999 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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