Write a letter to the hotel manger in another city to ask about a 2 days business trip for yourself and your colleagues.
Include an introduction to your office
Information about the business trip
Other requests
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing from Hyderabad working at SSG multinational company, Hitech city which deals with overseas banking. My colleagues and I are travelling to Mumbai for a business trip and are very much looking forward to stay at your hotel's deluxe suite room. We are three people and would very much like to have one single room hence would request you for a huge chamber with three individual single beds.
Our trip commences this weekend and the flight lands at 8:00 am on Saturday morning at Mumbai Airport. We have an important meeting scheduled with our Mumbai clients from 11:00 am to 4:30 pm. The same repeats on Sunday as well and we depart from hotel premises on Monday morning.
During our stay at your prestigious space we would like a complimentary breakfast service & good wifi connection. Also please do share the charges of the meeting halls inclusive of lunch buffet, tea and snacks as we have decided to host the meeting at your location with a total number of 25 people including us hence request you for a five star service.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
Manjyot
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to staying'.
Suggestion: to staying
... trip and are very much looking forward to stay at your hotels deluxe suite room. We ar...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eakfast service & good wifi connection. Also please do share the charges of the meet...
^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you Yours faithfully Manjyot
^^^^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from you Yours faithfully Manjyot
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90206185567 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45574639109 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644329896907 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0693942823 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154008715202 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650154185078 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599575052063 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735158184067 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576881665086 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.