You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say:
1) Give details of the job
2) Why do you think the interview went well?
3) Why do you need to know the result?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to enquire about the outcome of the recent job interview held for the post of Assistant Professor – History at your university. Allow me to elaborate.
I had appeared for the interview for the aforementioned post. I was told that the job involves teaching students of the Bachelor Programme about World War 1 and 2 histories along with the events that transpired in that period.
However, I am confident of being offered the same role because there were only two candidates who had appeared for the interview. The interviewer had categorically stated to me while interviewing me that I am the candidate that they have been waiting for and that the interview is just a formality.
Furthermore, I also had the opportunity to appear for an interview at another college and was offered the position with a different role. I am waiting for the outcome of the interview to make up my mind.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to enquire about the...
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for your reply. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9649122807 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91713820222 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4380013347 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180280846223 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703921586871 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566095628743 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105429298191 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041768372177 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.