Write a letter to an insurance company reguarding lost your valuable thing

Essay topics:

Write a letter to an insurance company reguarding lost your valuable thing

Dear sir
my name is Hardeep singh . I am writing this letter about my complain which related to loss my expensive thing .it was a iPhone model 8+ cell phone.
Actually, I went to holiday trip in Goa . this was gone for only weeKend . I was carry my cell phone consciously.I rembered that last time ,I attended a phone call which come from overseas it was going too long one hour then after I think I got back in my pocket but I had doubted to reguarding situation becouse during the journey it was slipped from my pocket and fall down in the bus .this misshapping gone in crowd . So it may be happened in those time
it my humble request pleased it should claim as soon as posiable as I am disturb without this equpement and I all ready payed all instalments on proper timing and according to the argument it is consider in the insurance claim .i hope you can understand my situation and I am waiting for your positive response
yours faithfully,
harpreet singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir my name is Hardeep singh . I am writing ...
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Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Dear sir my name is Hardeep singh . I am writing this letter about my compl...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...which related to loss my expensive thing .it was a iPhone model 8+ cell phone. A...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... Actually, I went to holiday trip in Goa . this was gone for only weeKend . I was ...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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...tually, I went to holiday trip in Goa . this was gone for only weeKend . I was carry...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... in Goa . this was gone for only weeKend . I was carry my cell phone consciously....
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...only weeKend . I was carry my cell phone consciously.I rembered that last time ,I...
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... I was carry my cell phone consciously.I rembered that last time ,I attended a p...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e consciously.I rembered that last time ,I attended a phone call which come from ...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... from my pocket and fall down in the bus .this misshapping gone in crowd . So it m...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... the bus .this misshapping gone in crowd . So it may be happened in those time ...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...wd . So it may be happened in those time it my humble request pleased it should c...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disturbed'.
Suggestion: disturbed
...hould claim as soon as posiable as I am disturb without this equpement and I all ready ...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: considered
...ing and according to the argument it is consider in the insurance claim .i hope you can ...
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...nt it is consider in the insurance claim .i hope you can understand my situation a...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
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... it is consider in the insurance claim .i hope you can understand my situation an...
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Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... I am waiting for your positive response yours faithfully, harpreet singh
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r positive response yours faithfully, harpreet singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, may, so, then, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45197740113 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50732573387 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.06225396 44.8134815571 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 16.8248392259 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0837255443411 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342250416032 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443142579344 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556398061458 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337711784217 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.