Write a letter inviting your friend to a family function. Tell him/her:
-What the occasion is
-What your plans are
-Why it is important he/she comes
Dear Mike,
How are you? How is your family? I hope everyone is ok in these uncertain times. I have not seen you for ages and miss you so much. I think you remember
I’ve told you that my father bought a new summer house and next weekend we are going there for a barbecue and celebration of Oktoberfest with my extended family. As you are almost an elder brother for me, I would like you to come to the celebration. Frankly speaking, it won’t be as fun as it could be if you are not able to come.
Let me give you some details of how everything is going to be. Everywhere we are going to put big pumpkins for decoration. Then, my husband will prepare pickled meat and salad with cucumbers and tomatoes on me. As well as salad, I will bake your favorite apple pie. For the beverage, we are going to purchase different kinds of beer and craft one among them.
We are not going to take children and the elderly with us, so it will be a really funny and restful weekend. Please, come and take your wife with you, I will be happy to spend time with her.
I am looking forward to your earliest answer.
Take care,
Maria
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...seen you for ages and miss you so much. I think you remember I’ve told you tha...
^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d miss you so much. I think you remember I’ve told you that my father bought a ne...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, if, look, really, so, then, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3023255814 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25226765122 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1426655038 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8125 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4375 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739361219699 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360289314616 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623972634158 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542009585753 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253943734289 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...seen you for ages and miss you so much. I think you remember I’ve told you tha...
^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d miss you so much. I think you remember I’ve told you that my father bought a ne...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, if, look, really, so, then, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3023255814 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25226765122 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1426655038 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8125 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4375 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739361219699 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360289314616 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623972634158 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542009585753 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253943734289 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.