A local magazine editor has asked readers opinion. Write a letter to magazine editor.
Describe what made you to choose this magazine?
What do you like or dislike about it?
What improvements do you want to see?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to your latest questioning about readers feedback.
As you aware, your magazine is quite popular; personally, I have been purchasing it since 2014. Frankly speaking, I was going through hard period back then and I had decided to read something inspiring and saw the magazine “Psychology”. I had given it a shot and to my surprise, the magazine was incredible.
Especially, I am fond of motivation articles and interviews with famous psychologists. For instance, there is an article by Labkovsky about relationships is very useful and contains plenty of practical advises in the latest issue of The Psychology magazine. However, from my point of view it is a serious drawback for the journal is that it does not give coverage to adolescent upbringing.
As far as improvements concerned, I think that the periodical should cover more issues related to upbringing children and adolescents particularly. It is understood, that your readers as parents have some difficulties how to deal with teenagers and how to encourage them to follow right path. In addition, it will be helpful to add a column with stories of the readers who could write their stories of success.
Thank you for your kind attention to our need.
Yours sincerely,
Maria Vlassova
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-23 | Mariamirabella | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...give coverage to adolescent upbringing. As far as improvements concerned, I thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, however, if, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19248826291 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21231759459 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6962395054 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12427828673 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421273454023 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413273606519 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688396291213 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427500152244 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.