Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live describe the problem explain what you want him to do

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house.
-Explain where you live
-describe the problem
-explain what you want him to do

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the pathetic condition of street in front of my resident.

I am resident of Garden Bay, Phase 1. It has got an excellent infrastructure and surrounded by trees and plants, which made me to purchase this home. Eventually there are problems coming up.

It began last year when the construction of apartments started in back side of the residential area. It is a huge residential area with around 200 families in that area. All the heavy vehicle, which are carrying the construction material are passing through our lane, because of the traffic congestion in the highway. Due to this the road is in extremely damaged and urgently require your attention.

Earlier builder promised that he will get the road repaired after the completion of his project, but six months passed and nothing has been done so far. I request you to kindly get the road build again as it is causing huge inconvenience to the local residents or file the complaint against the builder.

Hope to get the solution soon.

Yours faithfully,
Ramya Sai

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2020-05-17 Shraddanand 74 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90760869565 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74244429458 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4703810799 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113190339635 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367769626553 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425308541896 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475339221563 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327721796374 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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