Write a letter to manager about the important documents left in their taxi.-Where did you left it?-Why is important?-What is in there?

Essay topics:

Write a letter to manager about the important documents left in their taxi.
-Where did you left it?
-Why is important?
-What is in there?

Dear John,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the important documents, I forgot in one of your company's cab. Based on the invoice details with me, the taxi number is MH02BT1244 and Mr. Ramesh Kumar is the driver of the same.
The day before yesterday, I had an interview with one of the prestigious audit firm of the town in the morning. I booked cab from Dahisar to Andheri. I had with me all my important documents such as results of my college as well as of professional exams, reference letter of my employer and other photo id proofs. All these I has kept in black folder and that i kept on rear seat, and i sat in the front one, as there was heavy traffic because of the rush hour in morning, I reached a bit late so in hurry. I actually forgot to take folder, which i came to know when i reached the office. I came back to see the cab but it was not there. I request you to contact the cab driver as earliest, as all those documents are really important for me as those were original and required for further process of my Interview.
I have enclosed herewith the invoice copy and my contact details as well. I will be really obliged if i get my documents as soon as possible.

Yours Faithfully,
Bhavesh

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2019-01-08 bhavesh7890 78 view
Essays by user bhavesh7890 :

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... and other photo id proofs. All these I has kept in black folder and that i kept on...
^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ese I has kept in black folder and that i kept on rear seat, and i sat in the fro...
^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...older and that i kept on rear seat, and i sat in the front one, as there was heav...
^
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I actually forgot to take folder, which i came to know when i reached the office....
^
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... take folder, which i came to know when i reached the office. I came back to see ...
^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ck to see the cab but it was not there. I request you to contact the cab driver a...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d for further process of my Interview. I have enclosed herewith the invoice copy...
^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce copy and my contact details as well. I will be really obliged if i get my docu...
^
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ls as well. I will be really obliged if i get my documents as soon as possible. ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27896995708 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45031679305 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587982832618 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6297338858 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130777746049 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393474305515 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615026548278 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968310136524 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651536774094 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.