Write a letter to the manager of the shipping company about damage to some of your furniture and possessions while shipment to overseas.
When and where was the shipment
Describe the damages
what do you want the shipment company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the damages caused for my furniture which was shipped to Canada through your company.
One of my friend recommended your company when I was in a need to send my dining table and its six chairs to my sister's place in Canada. I requested to ship the things on 23rd October in your Florida branch and made the full payment.
It was reached my sister's place on last Monday. However, there are some damages in the furniture. Legs of three of the chairs were broken and not in the condition to be used. I am very dissappointed about the service I received from your company.
I called your call centre to make the complaint about the issue but i was not given the answer properly. It would be appreciated if you could replace the damaged chairs with new or compensate money for damages.
I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
John Abrahm
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... make the complaint about the issue but i was not given the answer properly. It w...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... new or compensate money for damages. I would appreciate your immediate attent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68674698795 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50943928551 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3215230162 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198206019188 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682635442962 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432885426253 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105848137268 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499110948707 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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