You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accomodation office at the local college. In your letter: Explain where your apartment is, describe the room, what kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I have a spare room to rent it out for who are in need.
I am working as an accountant in a private bank and residing in a two bedroom apartment in Yarn city near to the railway station. I am looking forward to rent one room as one room is enough for me.
The room is a master bedroom of the apartment. It has an attached bathroom and also a small balcony. The room has the basic needs such as a bed, a table and chair, a ceiling fan and a cupboard.
I prefer a first year female student to rent the room and also the person should be a vegetarian as I am allergic to smell of meat items.
It is appreciated if you could find a suitable person as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Anne
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 656.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15189873418 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42609062457 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4939995199 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261499738545 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906284657108 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577460463548 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12474095879 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614171552675 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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