Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I would like to take a training course. The course is related to my field, which is Computer-Aided Design, so I believe that the course would be beneficial for me. I kindly would like you to consider my wish favorably.
Let me explain it more detail. The course just advertised 2 days ago. Once I saw the advertisement which was about Designing program. I got really excited because I am interested and that is the field I would like to improve myself. When I was in university one of my teacher open course same as advertised one but I could applied it because of my time table in school. There are more advantages of learning that software for my job as well such as instead of drawing by hand I would be drawing via computer. Therefore, No more time will be wasted, as well as works will be drawn precisely. Even though the time tables would not be suitable for me, I will do my best to arrange a time table neither I will lose my energy to work nor I will miss the course time.
Would you kindly let me participate in that course? It would be great if you could give me a chance to evaluate this opportunity.
I look forward to hearing from you soon
Yours sincerely
ERMAN
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you to consider my wish favorably. Let me explain it more detail. The cours...
^^
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... The course just advertised 2 days ago. Once I saw the advertisement which was about...
^^^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'apply'
Suggestion: apply
...urse same as advertised one but I could applied it because of my time table in school. ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36480686695 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53137398688 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1055367952 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6428571429 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189605381515 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731872376003 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733833748029 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120244211311 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570484333706 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.