Dear Mr. Loyko,
I am writing to you regarding the initiatives which were announced last week by the representative of your Rivne Bus Enterprise in local newspapers. I would like to express my dissatisfaction with such uncomfortable alterations in your service.
Having cancelled the possibility to make trips with pets you have deprived significant number of your commuters to travel by your buses. Saying about me, it was unpleasant news with dramatic consequences. When I was booking a bus ticket to Dnipro city in your office one month ago, I was not informed about these restrictions. Since, I was planning to take my cat with me in a special backpack. Having found out the news I had to refuse from the trip and cancel it.
I believe the best way to rectify the situation is to return the option traveling with lovely pets.
I hope this matter will receive your attention and previous decision will be reviewed in immediate time. Thank you in advance for your help .
Yours sincerely,
Tania Boyko
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... not informed about these restrictions. Since, I was planning to take my cat with me ...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n is to return the option traveling with lovely pets. I hope this matter will re...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...time. Thank you in advance for your help . Yours sincerely, Tania Boyko
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90058479532 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90076079612 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4484704163 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184203961917 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686558068362 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652326436801 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09776459691 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617679410138 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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