Nowadays, the gender equality at work is the hottest discussed theme in our society. On the one hand women in well-developed western countries are at least allowed to apply for the positions, which by-and-large are assumed to be male, for example serving in military or to be the head of a political party. Whereas, for eastern women, especially from poor regions, such opportunities are unattainable, moreover, even under prohibition. There are numerous fundamentally distinguished views on this issue and I intend to give a brief outline of the main arguments.
From ancient times to these days, the majority of nations and cultures assume a woman to be a weak personality. Thus her main responsibilities are giving birth and raising children, preparing food and supporting household, as well as (appasing) satisfy her husband. In addition, the women rights have been neglected; they even used to be deprived of the chance to take part in the elections. All these have led to the establishing of a women's movement which is called feminism and its main target is to advocate their rights.
However, a lot of people claim that, a woman is the same equal member of society as a man, with the same constitutional rights and obligations. Solving her destiny by anybody in the world and depriving her the chance of choosing career should be an unacceptable state policy. It is scientifically confirmed fact that gender has no impact on person’s professional qualities, such as responsibility, attention to details, an enquiring mind, leadership capacities and any other which are significantly important for being an excellent professional in a particular sphere.
In conclusion, I am strongly convinced that only our knowledge, skills and experience should determine the vacancies we are able to apply for.
- In some countries some people think that women should have equality with men in particular equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the army Others think women are not suitable for such jobs Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field as long as they are playing well Do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Write a letter to the manager of your local bus services They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconvenience for you In your letter explain Q What are the changes Q What are the problems you are facing Q What part of the s 84
- There is a problem in the road outside your house Write a letter to your local councilor In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done 78
- Write a letter to government about lack of sport facilities in your hometown for people on your age In your letter you should tell what facilities you want why you want them what suggestions you can give 52
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21649484536 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20791804479 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5840461332 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190163351962 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602237021645 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374181530021 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975965688486 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445002007175 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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