Nowadays, creating idols out of the sport celebrities is a really fashionable trend in society. Moreover, the majority of fans justify every action which is committed by popular sportsmen, even if they behave themselves in a rude way in public or in a private life, demonstrate aggression and promote violence. I totally disagree with the idea that anybody, regardless a social status and achievements may be allowed to act in a way that negatively influences the humanity welfare and breaks somebody’s rights.
First and foremost, youngsters and teenagers admire the popular sportsmen especially basketball players, footballers, hockey players, boxers. They attempt to follow them in infinitesimal details, cloning their style of life, imitating gestures, wearing the same brands of clothes. Furthermore, latter even blindly copy former’s being without comprehension of consequences. Thus, famous sportsmen should be prudent in their actions and responsible for young funs. If any of them allow themselves violate laws and regulations, insulting weaker, sharing of swearing words, they must be strictly punished.
Secondly, from the ancient times to the present day sportsmen have been honorable personalities who have been playing significantly important role in forming society and even geo policy. Since, they represent country on the International arena and people around the world estimate particular country, by not only the game results and physical performances, as well as, culture of behavior the athletes. Therefore, indecent treatment causes negative reputation for the whole state and has to be unacceptable.
In conclusion, sport attains are excellent example and challenge for our own goal. Simultaneously, we should be fair and never justify someone’s fault by fame.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'by popular'.
Suggestion: by popular
...justify every action which is committed by popular by popular sportsmen, even if they behave themselv...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a rude way" with adverb for "rude"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ortsmen, even if they behave themselves in a rude way in public or in a private life, demonst...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the popular'.
Suggestion: the popular
...remost, youngsters and teenagers admire the popular the popular sportsmen especially basketball players...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74538745387 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10194519128 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70110701107 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.064989338 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114286567691 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328056230931 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227087510935 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598670277253 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239127456197 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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