Write a letter to the neighbour for noise from your house from some days. Apologise

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the neighbour for noise from your house from some days. Apologise

Dear Jonathon,

I was very shocked to receive a letter from you saying a noise from my flat. I am really very sorry for the inconvenience caused to you and for the distress. however, I am undertaking renovation of my flat. due to work pressure, I cannot take leave from office and hence, renovation work has to be done at evening, as I am unable to remain at home during day times.

I apologise from the bottom of my heart for the difficulties you have been facing. As the work was supposed to be completed sooner but due to some emergencies of the worker it’s delaying. I will make sure that the work of renovation is completed within a limited span of time i.e within two days from now.

due to rainy season coming nearby, my walls are totally drained. however, this renovation was a must. I am fixing tiles on my walls,that is the reason there is so much noise.

I assure you that you will no more face any problem.

sorry to have caused this problem.

Yours truly,

Kate.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...nce caused to you and for the distress. however, I am undertaking renovation of my flat...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...I am undertaking renovation of my flat. due to work pressure, I cannot take leave f...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...f time i.e within two days from now. due to rainy season coming nearby, my walls...
^^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...g nearby, my walls are totally drained. however, this renovation was a must. I am fixin...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...as a must. I am fixing tiles on my walls,that is the reason there is so much noise. ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sorry
...t you will no more face any problem. sorry to have caused this problem. Yours t...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is problem. Yours truly, Kate.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58011049724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53232814135 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9459864824 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7692307692 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189652352911 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610753693233 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783601833285 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703152302386 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862846565479 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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