Dear Jay,
Hi I am Rachel Thomas. How are you? Hope you are doing great. I am writing this to let you know that I absolutely loved all the photos that are taken by you during my grandmother’s 80th birthday celebration. Especially the one picture in which all family member are present, that is out of the world.
Furthermore, we are so delighted with your work that I am planning to give you another project. Actually, in upcoming December my cousin Nikita is going to get married and I thought that it would be perfect if you can come and take photographs of her wedding. It is a very private ceremony with only immediate family members to attend. Your skill of taking candid pictures are excellent and I am hoping to see some of them as early as possible.
Let me know if you need any further detail about the wedding.
Yours friendly,
Rachel Thomas
- Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house They just have sent you some holiday photographs Write a letter to your friends In your letter Thank them for the holiday and the photos Explain why you didn t write 73
- Your son is learning a second language at school but he needs some extra lessons Write a letter to a teacher asking for help In your letter 1 explain why your son needs help 2 ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods 3 and suggest a possi 73
- Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment 61
- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them Do you agree or disagree 67
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for companies or organisations What might this be the cause What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57419354839 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58869711584 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683870967742 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8033160439 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4545454545 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309211616032 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103938188199 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425697552567 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172392733679 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803097610637 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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