You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service Say when and how you ordered the cheque book Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the man

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.

Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Wick and I have a savings account in your SBI bank. I am writing about the dissatisfaction of the service from your bank.
It has been two weeks that I have requested to issue the new cheque book. I need a cheque book for around 21st oct so I raised it in the 1st of Oct beforehand. However, I haven’t received neither a booklet nor any notification for the same.
I still have one week to manage finance, but I severely disappointed with the process I would have missed my due payments which might affect my credit score.
Anyways, this needs to be complained as the other bank is merely close and quick services provided by the other bank. Also, the ROI is 2% higher compared to this bank which is waste of time. I will change my bank accounts to the other banks.
It could be much better in terms of services but for now I must raise a complaint for this case.
Kindly look urgently into this matter.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, look, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39779005525 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43938762975 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1527410646 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204444246667 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742039240686 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677301450205 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869366381937 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629805784103 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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