Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the holiday and the photos
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you in best of your health. I still remember the great time I had with you guys back in Sydney last month.
I have received the photos from your side and these have been brilliantly shot by Jade. She definitely is an excellent photographer, I suggest she should start some professional photography on her own. I will cherish these photographs for the rest of my life and these pictures will remind me of the great holiday I had with you guys. I would like to thank you for sending these pictures and the hospitality during my visit.
Though I wanted to write earlier, due to the vacation, there was a huge work piled up in the office and I had some important work assignments which needed my immediate attention.
We have a long weekend in Perth next week, why don't you guys come here?. I will make sure you guys will have a great holiday here.
Look forward to seeing you soon.
Warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope this letter finds you in best of yo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts which needed my immediate attention. We have a long weekend in Perth next wee...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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... a long weekend in Perth next week, why dont you guys come here?. I will make sure y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to seeing you soon. Warm wishes vinshu
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seeing you soon. Warm wishes vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56725146199 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41805617321 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8148039586 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335984640377 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113272105514 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583990174143 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168260884512 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739643473568 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.