Write a letter to a travel agent expressing your dissatisfaction with their facilities due to a problem you had on a holiday.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my complaint regarding the issues faced, during my hotel stay at Royal Hotel. I stayed here from 3rd August to 14th August and was shocked by the standard of food and accommodation.
To begin with, the hotel room was small and untidy and was the condition was very different compared to the advertisement. The bathroom was uncleaned, bedsheets contain food stains, the room heater was not working properly and no proper room services were provided by them.
To make this worst, the food offered was unsatisfactory. All through your advertisement promised it to be a kind of five-star restaurant food, but was of very poor standard.
I would like to get a full refund for the cost of my cruise and an apology for the misinformation you shared in the advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Daljit Kaur
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87802287788 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5290173148 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783308047266 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339226387661 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299950463228 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412059320631 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206878895787 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87802287788 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5290173148 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783308047266 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339226387661 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299950463228 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412059320631 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206878895787 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.