Dear John,
I am writing this in order to request you to provide me with your assistance for setting up required equipment for my presentation. My presentation is due on Wednesday and it is about history of films. The presentation includes slides with images from original scripts that were used while making old films. Moreover, it also includes short clips from classic old movies and some from latest movies as well, to show how films have evolved through time.
The required equipment for the presentation involves, a microphone for me to speak and interact with audience, a projector to show all the slides and film clips, most importantly an audio speaker, so that all can hear what is being presented in the form of audio. In addition to this, make sure everything is controllable via a remote, as while presenting, I will be roaming around the place to interact with the audience.
Although my presentation is on Wednesday, may I suggest you to set all equipment up a day before, so that I could practice ,and check whether the presentation is being delivered correctly or not. Please make sure the sitting arrangement is row wise, and not in form of groups around the tables.
I hope this will not be of any trouble for you and you will be able to set it all up in no time, as you are an expert at it.
Regards,
Tehreem zahid
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the latest'.
Suggestion: from the latest
... clips from classic old movies and some from latest movies as well, to show how films have ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p a day before, so that I could practice ,and check whether the presentation is be...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65546218487 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70980716454 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584033613445 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1794270313 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253129015576 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868850105548 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860009017031 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150016530181 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226337563193 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.