You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company
Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. Recently, I got an invitation letter for pursuing to learn Cloud Services Technology from the Goggle. And, I would like to join the new batch which is going to start next month.
I urge you to please grant my leave to learn and upgrade my technical skills during the time of my training with the Goggle. The time duration of the training will be for two months. In this learning time, I would like to improve my skills in the fundamental concepts of server and database software with respect to Cloud Services.
After completion of the course, I will be working overtime to complete all the pending tasks which I would need to leave in the phase of my training with Goggle. Besides, I will actively replying to the urgent emails online and will be sharing some of the priority tasks with my team members to complete in the service level agreement time which is sanction with our clients.
Besides, this course will help me as well as the company's financial security. I will be able to upgrade the skillset in the technological areas, and our firm will be financially strong because of implementing the Cloud Services which can be bought at nominal cost. So, we would not be able to buy storage disks of large sizes which are costly. Furthermore, our manpower will be utilized in a productive manner to implement new ideas with our clients rather than performing mundane tasks at their jobs on daily basis.
I will be looking forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to cloud'
Suggestion: To cloud
...invitation letter for pursuing to learn Cloud Services Technology from the Goggle. An...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reply'
Suggestion: reply
... with Goggle. Besides, I will actively replying to the urgent emails online and will be...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rgent emails online and will be sharing some of the priority tasks with my team members to ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which is sanction with our clients. Besides, this course will help me as well as th...
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Line 9, column 388, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive manner" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...thermore, our manpower will be utilized in a productive manner to implement new ideas with our clients...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, look, so, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51403204889 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3310798844 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200200187735 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074320245318 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041952641587 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114818740181 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415265925847 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.