Dear Mr Bones,
I am writing to inform you about an opportunity to provide help in return to a benefit.
Several workers of Kukatpally bridge construction are unemployed due to a judicial proceeding of the construction site, their wages are not being paid. As a result, they are looking for work to meet their daily needs, to be specific, at the moment, they are suffering from poverty.
Firstly, we could provide them with temporary shelter, as they are tribe; who change their location according to work. Besides, we could also supply food and clothing, which could improve the present situation.
As we are planning to build a new block C for research and development at the corner site. We could hire these workers; once their work at the existing place finishes. That being said, This occasion suits well, as our organisation have asked employees to nominate any community service. I believe this is the perfect chance to benefit as well as serve.
I appreciate your quick attention, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
Smoky
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir location according to work. Besides, we could also supply food and clothing, ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0393258427 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66955628168 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696629213483 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9232925658 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870496062197 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468639520979 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731267246034 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563318228021 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620599609142 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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