The younger generation is often seen using cellphones, some parents agree while others disagree, while it is considered by many parents that it is useful at the time of emergency, I believe that it affects their mental ability and causes health issues.
On the one hand, it is common nowadays that both parents are working, which means most of the time in a day they are away from their children. Perhaps, to keep in touch with their offspring, parents think that it is impertinent to have a mobile phone with children. Another reason is that smartphones have a plethora of safety features which could be used y progeny in case of emergency. For example, the application called 'True caller' grants parents to access their children's realtime location and also provides call history, moreover progenitors can block the web content such as adult sites and disturbing blood shed etc. However, I believe that all the safety features are acceptable, but the main concern to a parent should be the harmful radiations cellphones produce.
On the other hand, The radiations from signals are not dangerous to adults, but for children, it is hazardous, as it causes many problems such as neurological and psychological. For instance, research conducted by the University of California in 2019 revealed that many children who suffered from memory loss and sleeping disorder were addicted to the mobile game called 'PUBG', due to the prolonged time of exposure to screen light and signals resulted in this condition. I believe cellphone companies manufacture them ideally to suit grownups, which indicates that they are not right for children's use.
In conclusion, although many children are using phones as their parents are worried about their safety. I believe that children's mental and emotional development is more important than their safety. Therefore children should not be allowed to use mobile phones until their adolescence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20900321543 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71984292148 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0743383371 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227748472577 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904615070109 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055076160007 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137409596196 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476690760772 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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