Write a letter to your English speaking friend who is visiting you soon and asking you what presents your family would like. Write
- Who your family consists of
- What kind of presents each member would like.
- How you feel about your friend coming to visit
Dear Anna,
It was a present puprise to hear from you after such a long time. I am cherish for our friendship and will never forget the wonderful time we had spend together in Toronto. I am pleased to hear that you are coming to visit me in India.
My parents and my younger are too very exited about your visit. Its is so kind of your to ask what type of present they would like from you. Honestly, your being presence here would itself be a great gift for themself. As far as, materialistic things are concern, nowadays everything is available here in India. So, I request you not to bother yourself in being any gifts from there.
I request you to please send me the details of your travel plan so i can make the best arrangements accordingly for your holiday. As your are aware that, India has a rich historical history along with various other tourist attraction. The Taj Mahal in Agra has the most popular tourist attraction. It is listed under one of the seven wonders of the world. The other favour places to visit India are such as the Golden Temple in Amritsar, beaches at Goa, various temples in the south along the wonderful backwater lakes in Kerla. I am very excited to see your visit. Luckly, there would be a summer break for me during your visit, we would enjoy and refresh all our old memories we had spend together in three years in the university. I am eger to meet you soon, but till then stay safe!
Yours faithfully,
Daljit Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'cherished'.
Suggestion: cherished
...r from you after such a long time. I am cherish for our friendship and will never forge...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... never forget the wonderful time we had spend together in Toronto. I am pleased to he...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... never forget the wonderful time we had spend together in Toronto. I am pleased to he...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...ent they would like from you. Honestly, your being presence here would itself be a g...
^^^^
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d me the details of your travel plan so i can make the best arrangements accordin...
^
Line 6, column 397, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (India) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... The other favour places to visit India are such as the Golden Temple in Amritsar, ...
^^^
Line 6, column 687, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...and refresh all our old memories we had spend together in three years in the universi...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 687, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...and refresh all our old memories we had spend together in three years in the universi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, honestly, if, so, then, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47014925373 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33442569557 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9479680598 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.875 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320060364611 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102901689238 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970894323846 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202548784659 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699655057819 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.