Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter:
– Describe the book.
– Why do you want him/her to read it?
– Tell him/her how to get the book.
Dear John,
HI there! I hope this letter finds you in the best of your spirits.it been too long when we connect with each other.i want to tell you about the book that i have read last month.
i know you are preparing for ielts exam.The book named competition success, written by Dr jenny juine, would be of proficient importance for you as it contains a bulk content on all the modules of writing , speaking , reading, listening.Morever, it contains essays written by ex examiners which would help you to understand the evaluation criteria. As you told me that you find speaking section more difficult, to your surprise, the methods given in this book are excellent. I am sure that all your doubts regarding ielts exam would be clear.
you can easily get this book at amazon by pre booking. this book is in great demand.Hence i suggest you to order as early as possible so that you can crack your exam in first attempt.
Looking forward to hear from you.
yours truly
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| 2019-05-02 | shbnam rani | 73 | view |
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- Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter:– Describe the book.– Why do you want him/her to read it?– Tell him/her how to get the book. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oo long when we connect with each other.i want to tell you about the book that i ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...he book that i have read last month. i know you are preparing for ielts exam.T...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he book that i have read last month. i know you are preparing for ielts exam.T...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...i know you are preparing for ielts exam.The book named competition success, written...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, would be of proficient importance for you as it contains a bulk content on all...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as it contains a bulk content on all the modules of writing , speaking , reading,...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...k content on all the modules of writing , speaking , reading, listening.Morever, ...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n all the modules of writing , speaking , reading, listening.Morever, it contains...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Morever
...writing , speaking , reading, listening.Morever, it contains essays written by ex exami...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...regarding ielts exam would be clear. you can easily get this book at amazon by p...
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Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...get this book at amazon by pre booking. this book is in great demand.Hence i suggest...
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Line 6, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...e booking. this book is in great demand.Hence i suggest you to order as early as poss...
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Line 6, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e booking. this book is in great demand.Hence i suggest you to order as early as poss...
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Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing. this book is in great demand.Hence i suggest you to order as early as possib...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...am in first attempt. Looking forward to hear from you. yours truly
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... Looking forward to hear from you. yours truly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61438670359 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.77615239 44.8134815571 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332513910679 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147913976098 0.0766984524023 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732492172342 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192405119204 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849835810954 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.