Write a letter to your friend asking him help to make a website

Dear Rahul,

Hope that you are in best of your health. I am writing this letter as I want a favor from you . I know you are a website designer at one of thr fortune 500 company and I would like you to design a website for my Home Décor business.

Recently, I started recycling waste plastic and transformed it into something that adds to the beauty of our house. It was a hobby that soon became a very profitable business. Now I have a team of 10 people who works dedicatedly in the production , marketing, packaging and delivering products to the customers.

I would like you to design such a website that is user friendly. I would like you to divide it into four different sections such as - room decor, living area decor, bathroom stuff and balcony decor .

I can provide you with all product images in PNG. file which I had already uploaded on my instagram handle.

looking forward to your response.
thanking you,
yours sincerely,
Parleen

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g this letter as I want a favor from you . I know you are a website designer at on...
^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... who works dedicatedly in the production , marketing, packaging and delivering pro...
^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... decor, bathroom stuff and balcony decor . I can provide you with all product ...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... bathroom stuff and balcony decor . I can provide you with all product images...
^
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: File
...ide you with all product images in PNG. file which I had already uploaded on my inst...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...ady uploaded on my instagram handle. looking forward to your response. thanking you...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
.... looking forward to your response. thanking you, yours sincerely, Parleen
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68639053254 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59428765637 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3521692853 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104179462315 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426474445264 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459700409323 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523651442216 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559832785774 0.0580467560999 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.