Write a letter to your friend to inform him about your visit to his country.
You should say:
- Why you chose his country
- What have you already planned
- Ask for some assistance/information
Dear Amir,
Finally, I have decided to visit you and hope this letter finds you in the best of health and happiness.
I am off for 3 weeks for my annual vacation and have planned USA as my holiday destination and visiting you in Texas is on my itinerary.
I will be leaving Dubai on 21th of January. I have planned a week in New York and the other in Washington, will do what you say in Texas.
New York is a happening place, I will be visiting a few friends and clubbing but a boat ride to see the Statue of Liberty, Time square and shopping is on my priority list. I will be alone in Washington, visiting the memorials. So, I am sorted for 2 weeks.
However, you have 2 weeks ahead to plan for my stay in Texas and it will be the last part of my journey. Can you think of a farm stay or a relaxing trip to the lakes for a quiet time out?
Can’t wait to be in your territory, see you soon, USA calling!!!!
Yours truly,
AM
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in the best of health and happiness. I am off for 3 weeks for my annual vacat...
^^^
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll be leaving Dubai on 21th of January. I have planned a week in New York and the...
^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon, USA calling!!!! Yours truly, AM
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08108108108 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41498850241 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1660053928 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25514115694 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103888707584 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694553099436 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142280822951 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499486359765 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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