Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">
Dear Samar,
It has been a while now since, our last call. I really miss hanging out together. You knew I was expecting a baby and I am really sorry that I couldn't write before, I was not feeling well the last months.
I had my delivery two weeks ago. I know you will be mad at me for not telling you earlier but, It was an unplanned labour. Doctor was not sure about my due day cause of some complications.
I am well now and the baby girl is in good health. I am planning a welcome party to my baby next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an online store. I reserved some cupcakes and pastries from a nearby bakery.
I bought my girl a lovely pink dress with a gorgeous ribbon at the back. I am sure you will love it.
The party will be at the backyard of my villa on Thursday afternoon.
You are the most important person, I want to see at this party no excuses. You are like a family to us.
I cann't wait to see you on next Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon.
lots of love,
Engy</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n style='font-size: 19.36px;'> Dear Samar, It has been a whi...
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Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...x;'> Dear Samar, It has been a while now since, our las...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ing a baby and I am really sorry that I couldnt write before, I was not feeling well th...
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Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...due day cause of some complications. I am well now and the baby girl is in...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g a welcome party to my baby next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an ...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ting and balloons from an online store. I reserved some cupcakes and pastries fro...
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Line 8, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...es and pastries from a nearby bakery. I bought my girl a lovely pink dress wit...
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Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d pastries from a nearby bakery. I bought my girl a lovely pink dress with...
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Line 8, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ess with a gorgeous ribbon at the back. I am sure you will love it. The party...
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Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of my villa on Thursday afternoon. You are the most important pe...
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Line 13, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon. lots of love, Engy
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. lots of love, Engy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53233830846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81335255526 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7657283591 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.5882352941 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8235294118 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64705882353 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989368070622 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329081286366 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393678971579 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489401852883 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400185602614 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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