Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> Dear Samar,
It has been a while now since, our last call and I really miss hanging out together don't you?. You knew I was expecting a baby , I was not feeling well the last months so, I couldn't write to you earlier.
I had my delivery two weeks ago, please don't to be angry as it was an unplanned delivery.
Me and my girl are in good health. We are planning a welcome party to our daughter next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an online store. my husband reserved some cupcakes
and pastries from a nearby bakery. My mother bought her a lovely pink dress with a gorgeous ribbon at the back, sure you will love it.
On Thursday afternoon, at the backyard of my villa the party is held.
You are the most important person, I want to see at this party, no excuses. You are like a family to us.I cann't wait to see you on next Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon.
lots of love,
Engy</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt-size: 19.36px;'> Dear Samar, It has been a while now since, our las...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and I really miss hanging out together dont you?. You knew I was expecting a baby ,...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nt you?. You knew I was expecting a baby , I was not feeling well the last months ...
^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... not feeling well the last months so, I couldnt write to you earlier. I had my deli...
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Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...I had my delivery two weeks ago, please dont to be angry as it was an unplanned deli...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gry as it was an unplanned delivery. Me and my girl are in good health. We...
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Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ting and balloons from an online store. my husband reserved some cupcakes and ...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kyard of my villa the party is held. You are the most important pe...
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Line 10, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...no excuses. You are like a family to us.I cannt wait to see you on next Thursday ...
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Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon. lots of love, Engy
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Line 14, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. lots of love, Engy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73142857143 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83399157805 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691428571429 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7230344951 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135033976455 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440099009752 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546159055981 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053445620007 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629158883355 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.