Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> Dear Samar,
It has been a while now since, our last call. I really miss hanging out together. You knew I was expecting a baby and I am really sorry that I couldn't write before, I was not feeling well the last months.I had my delivery two weeks ago. I know you will be mad at me for not telling you earlier but, It was an unplanned labour. Doctor was not sure about my due day cause of some complications.
I am well now and my girl is in good health. I am planning a welcome party to my daughter next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an online store. I reserved some cupcakes and pastries from a nearby bakery.I bought her a lovely pink dress with a gorgeous ribbon at the back. I am sure you will love it.The party will be at the backyard of my villa on Thursday afternoon.
You are the most important person, I want to see at this party, no excuses. You are like a family to us. I cann't wait to see you on next Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon.
lots of love,
Engy,</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt-size: 19.36px;'> Dear Samar, It has been a while now since, our last ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ing a baby and I am really sorry that I couldnt write before, I was not feeling well th...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... I was not feeling well the last months.I had my delivery two weeks ago. I know y...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...due day cause of some complications. I am well now and my girl is in good hea...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...welcome party to my daughter next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ting and balloons from an online store. I reserved some cupcakes and pastries fro...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...cakes and pastries from a nearby bakery.I bought her a lovely pink dress with a g...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cakes and pastries from a nearby bakery.I bought her a lovely pink dress with a g...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ess with a gorgeous ribbon at the back. I am sure you will love it.The party will...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...at the back. I am sure you will love it.The party will be at the backyard of my vil...
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Line 6, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of my villa on Thursday afternoon. You are the most important person, I wan...
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Line 8, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon. lots of love, Engy,
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Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. lots of love, Engy,
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ... lots of love, Engy,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48469387755 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87731128687 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7743067076 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7857142857 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125347960416 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438805688368 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519466319238 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607010068379 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694930784217 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.