Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter– Explain why you are organizing the party.– Describe what you are planning to do.– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter

– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> Dear Samar,

It has been a while now since, our last call. I really miss hanging out together. You knew I was expecting a baby and I am really sorry that I couldn't write before, I was not feeling well the last months.
I had my delivery two weeks ago. I know you will be mad at me for not telling you earlier but, It was an unplanned labour. Doctor was not sure about my due day cause of some complications.Me and my girl are in good health now. We are planning a welcome party to our daughter next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an online store. My husband reserved some cupcakes and pastries from a nearby bakery. My mother bought her a lovely pink dress with a gorgeous ribbon at the back, sure you will love it.The party will be at the backyard of my villa on Thursday afternoon.

You are the most important person, I want to see at this party, no excuses. You are like a family to us. I cann't wait to see you on next Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon.

lots of love,
Engy</span><br>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...bbon at the back, sure you will love it.The party will be at the backyard of my vil...
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...d of my villa on Thursday afternoon. You are the most important pe...
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...t Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon. lots of love, Engy

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...n. lots of love, Engy

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56923076923 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86085829615 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9259501083 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6428571429 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125583799172 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427193887211 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534200943387 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729490774608 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712805005765 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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