Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter:
• a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country.
b. Describe the public event.
c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.
Dear Jason,
Hope everything is fine. It has been 3 weeks that we have not been in touch. I am writing you for an invitation.
I wish to invite you at my home if you can come to Izmir, Turkey where is going to host an Ottoman festival in the city centre next month on 27th of June. It would be a great opportunity for us to spend time together, furthermore we can explore the unique conventions of Ottoman Empire in the festival.
In the event, each period of that Empire is illustrated by famous actors and actresses in 10 different venues. Moreover, many Ottoman cuisines are offered in the restaurants in the festival zone. Many people all around Turkey visit that event so as to discover the lifestyle of Ottoman society.
Apart from the event, we can go to Cesme where is mostly popular with its beaches and seaside. This district is one of the most attractive destinations in Turkey in summertime. In addition, we can travel to Istanbul where is the most visited hotspot for tourists in Turkey. We can wal around the Sultanahmet Square and we can have a tour in the Bosphorus Straits.
I hope you are available next month and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Wishes,
Ali Larter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ople all around Turkey visit that event so as to discover the lifestyle of Ottoman socie...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...st attractive destinations in Turkey in summertime. In addition, we can travel to Istanbul...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61467889908 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57055969064 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9630262035 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8571428571 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086256696123 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306416992256 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273525683861 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509525540508 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130884319522 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.