Dear Chinedu,
It's been a while and I hope this letter meets you well. I'm very excited to hear you will be visiting Abuja next month.
Abuja is a very beautiful and multi-cultural city. And as I'm sure you remember, I spent almost a year working in Abuja, so I'm quite familiar with the city. I will try my best to make your stay as stress-free as possible. Abuja has a lot places you can go to, but I will personally suggest you check out Abacha barracks, they have some old relics from the Nigerian civil war. Remember I once told you about the Arts and culture centre? It's a must see, with lots of nice things on display.
I know you like fish a lot, so I'll suggest a grilled fish spot known as "Ejanla", they sell arguably the best fish in abuja. You can also try out the local restaurants in Garki village area so as to get a taste of the local meals. In terms of transportation, I will recommend that you use the bolt cabs. They are very comfortable and relatively cheap. Also try registering with the tour buses, this will enable you to take a tour of the town.
I hope you have a wonderful stay in Abuja. Hopefully the information I gave you helps make your stay much more fun. Hope to catch up with you soon.
Your loving friend
Chidi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... and I hope this letter meets you well. Im very excited to hear you will be visiti...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...autiful and multi-cultural city. And as Im sure you remember, I spent almost a yea...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...pent almost a year working in Abuja, so Im quite familiar with the city. I will tr...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... you about the Arts and culture centre? Its a must see, with lots of nice things on...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...play. I know you like fish a lot, so Ill suggest a grilled fish spot known as &a...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
.... I know you like fish a lot, so Ill suggest a grilled fish spot known as 'Ejan...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...local restaurants in Garki village area so as to get a taste of the local meals. In term...
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... very comfortable and relatively cheap. Also try registering with the tour buses, th...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...a. Hopefully the information I gave you helps make your stay much more fun. Hope to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35443037975 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54560147719 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8405583731 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7058823529 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9411764706 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157854594042 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537484624337 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340858512499 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976398561584 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025956557145 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.