Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ebube Chidi, and I am writing to commend a staff of your organisation for a selfless act he did for me.
I was on the my way to work on the 7am bus on Friday 26th July 2022, when suddenly I started feeling light headed. I noticed my heart rate go faster than normal and I also started feeling dizzy, all of a sudden I could not sit upright anymore and my condition worsened by the minute.
While I was going through all these symptoms, a man sitted across from me noticed that I was not feeling ok, and he came over to my seat to ask what was wrong with me. I vaguely remember telling him that I was feeling light headed and then I lost consciousness, only to wake up in the hospital and I was told that a kind man brought me here. He left his name as Mr Charles White, and his workplace as Green Pharmaceuticals.
I want to express my gratitude to Mr Charles White and also let your company know that you have a true gentleman working with you.
Yours faithfully
Ebube Chidi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...selfless act he did for me. I was on the my way to work on the 7am bus on Friday 26...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26288659794 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47530582142 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4702525816 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156461214199 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772570486578 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860138966492 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107776026345 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979439193818 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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