Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• suggest an interesting part of the city to live in
• describe the public transport in your city
• say how your friend can meet new people there.
My joy knew no bounds when I read your email that you are coming to my country next month. As you will be working in Stackpole company, luckily, which is close to my hometown Kitchener. You can stay in common view apartments where I am living now. In Kitchener, Different communities are living there and it is pretty peaceful town.
In terms of public transport, there are numerous options available, like you can commute through buses, trains and underground subway. if you buy Easy go card, you don’t need to buy tickets every time whenever you get in or off. You just need to tap the card over the surface of machine in the bus. I will assist you in purchasing the bus card and about the timing and locations of bus stop.
I’ll introduce you to my friends, and also if want to meet locals, you can choose to dwell in sharing in a house. There are more ways to come across more people by joining local dance clubs and do some volunteer work.
Looking forward to meeting you
Lots of love,
Manish
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-01-28 | Manish Rooprai | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work. Looking forward to meeting you Lots of love, Manish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53804347826 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30910475987 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.1337034056 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0718664107952 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290822618831 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275630967347 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469142833162 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206292644364 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.