Write a /letter to your landlord about the problem with a water leak in your house. Please say
– What is the problem?
– What is the source of the problem, in your opinion?
– What do you think needs to be done?
Dear Ramesh Ji,
How are you? I hope you are doing well with your business and family. I am writing this letter to you regarding water leakage concern in bathroom tabs. I hope you remember this issue from the last incidence and now this issue is reoccurring.
I want to bring your attention towards the tab company, I believe the problem is not the plumbing but the tabs currently in use in the bathroom. All the tabs of the bathroom are leaking except the washbasin tab and in my observation, all the tabs used in the bathroom are from JK tabs and only the washbasin tab is from Jaguar.
In my opinion, it is better to replace all the tabs from JK tabs to Jaguar or some other if possible, to avoid this problem in the near future. I hope you will understand the current situation and help us to sort this matter as early as possible.
Thank you in anticipation
With regards
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ater leakage concern in bathroom tabs. I hope you remember this issue from the l...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e and now this issue is reoccurring. I want to bring your attention towards th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50303030303 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41698914919 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8709813092 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14275135804 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726848999122 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584101719278 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08183615194 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395208156604 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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