Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed. While others believe action can be taken to bring about change. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that human attitude and activities towards our planet earth has made the situation worse for other forms of life as well as for humans also. It is argued by a significant number of individuals that we cannot reverse it by doing any action. Although, others think some steps can help the world to be a better place than today. Before putting any opinion, it is important to investigate both the aspects.
On the one side, the rising population and demands to fulfil the need for them is destroying habitat for other creatures on this globe. Industrialization is one of the major contributors of destroying forests by means of which various species are getting extinct in different regions of the world. The concept of urban regions to build houses and other amenities for the growing people is ever rising issue and to complete the demands we are removing plants and other vegetation from the grassland and still feels insufficient. As per the survey. Hence, I believe that in the near future on earth will not sufficient to accommodate the ever rising population of this world. Besides, many scientists are looking for alternatives such as possibility of survival of other plants.
On the other side, although humans have made the situation difficult for other animals to live on the same planet, but the scientific approach can lead us to have a better future for all the living organisms. Our scientist with the support of technology and science has made tremendous efforts and developed a lot to bring back the good situation in this world for the possibility of survival of all creatures. For instance, plastic contamination in the sea is killing millions of lives every year around the world, however, to find an alternative for plastics, environmentalist have developed biodegradable plastic to overcome these problems.
In conclusion, although scientists are working hard to control the damaging situation by humans. But I personally believe that the time has gone and it is impossible to improve this condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...her forms of life as well as for humans also. It is argued by a significant number o...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cannot reverse it by doing any action. Although, others think some steps can help the w...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...grassland and still feels insufficient. As per the survey. Hence, I believe that i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06824925816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90936200717 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2568576088 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.866666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200522582388 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622279534936 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476494758456 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113390110573 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603349633282 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.