Dear Mr. Rami,
I hope this letter will find you in good health and prosperity ! I am writing this letter to drag your attention towards one of my serious problem which I am currently facing. As you are already aware that I have recently shifted in your building: Al Bawadi 2, flat no. 605 in Al Tawoon area.
However its been only two months since i have shifted in your apartment and everything was going well, untill last week, when I saw there is a leakage in the toilet wall. According to me the reason behind this leakage is that from the same wall kitchen water supply and other pipes for laundry room are also passing. Therefore there is chances that one of the pipe is leaking.
In addition to above, the leaking wall is also a common wall of living area. Therefore there is a sealant to the whole wall and thats why the apartment is smelling very bad.
I would like to request you to call and expert and resolve this issue as early as possible.
Eagerly waiting for your quick response.
Yours Sincerely,
XYZ
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... 2, flat no. 605 in Al Tawoon area. However its been only two months since i have s...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... there is a leakage in the toilet wall. According to me the reason behind this leakage is that ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ipes for laundry room are also passing. Therefore there is chances that one of the pipe i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 328, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are chances'?
Suggestion: there are chances
...aundry room are also passing. Therefore there is chances that one of the pipe is leaking. In ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 78, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...l is also a common wall of living area. Therefore there is a sealant to the whole wall an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...here is a sealant to the whole wall and thats why the apartment is smelling very bad....
^^^^^
Line 8, column 153, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... whole wall and thats why the apartment is smelling very bad. I would like to request yo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57219251337 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22492440144 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8541266142 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16323316289 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563944291618 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057122762647 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724270959916 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605367347 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... 2, flat no. 605 in Al Tawoon area. However its been only two months since i have s...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... there is a leakage in the toilet wall. According to me the reason behind this leakage is that ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ipes for laundry room are also passing. Therefore there is chances that one of the pipe i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 328, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are chances'?
Suggestion: there are chances
...aundry room are also passing. Therefore there is chances that one of the pipe is leaking. In ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 78, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...l is also a common wall of living area. Therefore there is a sealant to the whole wall an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...here is a sealant to the whole wall and thats why the apartment is smelling very bad....
^^^^^
Line 8, column 153, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... whole wall and thats why the apartment is smelling very bad. I would like to request yo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57219251337 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22492440144 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8541266142 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16323316289 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563944291618 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057122762647 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724270959916 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605367347 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.