Dear Mr Seth,
I am writing you this letter to apprise you about the water leakage issue in your house. I rented your 2BHK apartment in Lake view society earlier this month.
Initially, it all looked fine until a few days when I noticed dampening of the bedroom ceiling near the master bedroom. At first, I thought it to be from the outside pillar due to monsoon and heavy rainfall but soon I noticed the bathroom ceiling getting damp too. In fact, it has progressed to such an extent that water dribbles constantly throughout the day. I think the leakage is coming from the bathroom of the above flat. Recently they renovated their bathroom and installed a bathtub.
It is causing a lot of inconveniences as we are unable to use that bathroom and the dampness has caused constant bad odour across the whole room. I personally think, inspecting the upper floor bathroom by an expert and fixing the defect would solve the problem.
Hoping for your earliest action
Thanking you,
Neelam S
- People live longer today and so people should stay in the workforce longer.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent to hospital.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- Writing task 1 (a letter)You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say– What and when did you borrow?– What happened to it? Why?– What do you suggest to 73
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 61
- Do you agree or disagree: young people should try many different kinds of jobs or career before they decide the long term career of their life. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... it all looked fine until few days when i noticed dampening of the bedroom ceilin...
^
Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to monsoon and heavy rainfall, but soon i noticed the bathroom ceiling getting da...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84302325581 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4682612124 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703488372093 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2896148906 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168738818982 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591415996974 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693763696579 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105722998835 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757851257549 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.