Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns Include where you live what the problem is what he should do

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include:

where you live
what the problem is
what he should do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to complain about increase in noise level due to renovations and late night parties in neighborhood flats. My name is Ramandeep Kaur and I have been living as a tenant in 22E, A block, JQ apartments from past 2 years.

I have never faced such kind of problem in past years, but, these days situation is getting worse day by day. Firstly the timing of renovation work is very inconsiderable i.e. from morning 6am to 6 pm. Due to early morning noise, I could not able to sleep properly and thus, could not focus on my work. To make situation more worse, new tenants, recently moved in next apartment and hosting loud music parties till mid night every day causing disturbance in sleep.

I would be grateful, if you could bring these matter to management committee to change working hours of remodelling and to take stringent action against new tenants for not maintaining the laws of society. Even though, I also personally try to talk with them about parties, but, they did not pay any attention to my warnings.

I am hoping to hear from you soon.

Youre sincerely,
Raman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting to complain about increase in noise level due to renovations and late night ...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...nd of problem in past years, but, these days situation is getting worse day by day. ...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...not focus on my work. To make situation more worse, new tenants, recently moved in next ap...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rbance in sleep. I would be grateful, if you could bring these matter to manag...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You're
... I am hoping to hear from you soon. Youre sincerely, Raman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70256410256 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57122088848 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712820512821 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832452471156 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336680652258 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332589846889 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523465515537 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429139403365 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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