You have seen a tourist board advert welcoming nominations for a Best City / Town
Award. Nominate your home city/town. Write a letter to the Tourist Board. In your letter
Nomination you town/city and refer to its location Explain what is special about your
city/town. Say how winning an award would change your city/town.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to nominate
my city Chandigarh for Best city /Town Award. I have been living in this city since birth and
admired its beauty every day. Moreover, it is capital of Punjab and Haryana state and one of union terrorities of India located in northern part of the country .
This city is well-known for its organized structure, where residential and industrial area
are completely separated. Along with this, green environment of this city attracted most of the residents to live here permanently. In Addition, there are number of tourist attraction such as Sukhna lake, National Heritage Museum, Rock garden, Rose garden, Elante Mall etc. These all features of Chandigarh make this city more exceptional and unique.
I would be really honoured, if you could consider
my home city deserving for this awaid. If, this place receives the award, it will bring economy, industrialization, educational and
health care facilites.
I am hoping to hear a pošitive response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Raman
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-08-25 | Ramandeep Dhaliwal | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ity since birth and admired its beauty everyday. Moreover, it is capital of Punjab and ...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a located in northern part of the county . This city is well-known for its organi...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, where residential and industrial area completely separated. Along with this, g...
^^^
Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the residents') or simply say ''most residents''.
Suggestion: most of the residents; most residents
...reen environment of this city attracted most of residents to live here permanently. In Addition, ...
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Line 6, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nently. In Addition, there are number of tourist attraction such as Sukhna lake, ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29696969697 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87813144009 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.751515151515 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3064905694 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269398662338 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940171406329 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958623920167 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097192880623 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855764170585 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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