Write a letter to your local council that road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should:
Tell him your name and where are you living
Describe the problem
Suggest what you want him to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ruchi, and I am a resident of Prasavnath society for 7 years. I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards problems that are being faced due to the broken road outside my home.
Although the road was built a few months back, smaller pits have been formed owing to heavy rains. Unfortunately, uneven surface of road is giving rise to many issues. Firstly, vehicles cannot pass by smoothly and a little bit of carelessness can result in minor accidents. Secondly, rain water gets accumulate into these pits. This situation is extremely concerning because it gives rise to many seasonal diseases by favoring the breeding of mosquitoes.
I would suggest you to kindly send a team of efficient workers to repair the road at the earliest, so that inconvenience caused to the residents can be put to a halt.
I am looking forward for a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchi Verma
- There is a public park near where you live You have heard that local council wants to sell this park Write a letter to a local newspaper in your letter Introduce yourself Describe the importance of this park Say what action you will take if the council co 84
- Write a letter to your local council that road in front of your house is damaged In your letter you should Tell him your name and where are you living Describe the problem Suggest what you want him to do 69
- You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount Northern Ireland You need somewhere to live while you are there Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letter explain your situation describe the accommodation 78
- You recently saw a program on television You would like to comment on the same Write a letter to the satellite channel In your letter Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about Give your comments on the content and quality 61
- You are studying a short course in another country Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider There is a major problem with accommodation Write a letter to the course provider In your letter Say what the problem is Describe the accommodation y 73
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... vehicles cannot pass by smoothly and a little bit of carelessness can result in minor acc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...umulate into these pits. This situation is extremely concerning because it gives rise to many seasonal ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92993630573 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78032591237 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738853503185 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0750545851 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1524388864 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507393204295 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681794331441 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065206319162 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614895175906 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... vehicles cannot pass by smoothly and a little bit of carelessness can result in minor acc...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...umulate into these pits. This situation is extremely concerning because it gives rise to many seasonal ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92993630573 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78032591237 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738853503185 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0750545851 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1524388864 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507393204295 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681794331441 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065206319162 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614895175906 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.