You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:
When you will be arriving and leaving
What type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
Inquire about the activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Vikas, and I am writing to request you to book a room in your hotel on the weekend of 30 April.
I along with my family shall arrive at the hotel on 30th April at around 10 am. As this time is little earlier than usual check-in time so I request you to make necessary arrangements for early check-in.
I understand that it is the New Year time, and most of rooms in your hotel might be pre-booked; however, only a family suite which can accommodate up to three people and which is equipped with some basic amenities such min-fridge and a microwave can suffice my requirement. Kindly provide me the details regarding the availability and the price for this kind of accommodation.
Further, I have keen interest in hiking, trekking and campaign so I am looking on internet for some camps near to your hotel which host these kinds of activities. Meanwhile, it will also be helpful if you can provide information on famous tourist spots and activities in the vicinity of your hotel to keep ourselves engaged during this trip.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Vikas Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the rooms') or simply say ''most rooms''.
Suggestion: most of the rooms; most rooms
...stand that it is the New Year time, and most of rooms in your hotel might be pre-booked; howe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81632653061 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71156070054 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3457933043 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258965947344 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980429319918 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585692595648 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144586710864 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643206724115 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.