Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know about an issue that I am facing in my computer. Although the system is in good conditions, the official software has been crashed; it has made me completely impossible to do my job. I would appreciate if you could consider my situation.
Let me explain my situation in detail. Everything was going fine until yesterday evening when I tried to update the remote application, which we use for our work. A message popped up in my screen mentioning that the software has been corrupted, and I tried to resolve it by my own using all the troubleshoots. However, nothing helped me to find a solution. Solely depending on that program, I have not worked since I faced this problem, which makes me unproductive.
Would you mind sending me a copy of the software package that can be re-installed in my computer? It would be of great help should you send them with the license number to activate.
Thank you for the consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Alia Samsun
- Every year your company organizes a sports event for a local community but this year they can t do it Write a letter to your local newspaper about this In your letter Express your feelings about missing the sports event Tell them about your pla 78
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 78
- University should be free for all students To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87510922596 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674285714286 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4239774756 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144054672806 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499939860951 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412742268838 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726663123799 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019136597601 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.