Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to arriving late at the office because of computing through public means of transport.
I apologize for coming late for the past five days because my car engine got broken down last week while I was going back home. Recently, I had bought this car because it was a convenient and efficient means of transport to coming into the city from my place.
As you know, I live in the outskirts of the city and my current situation that my car engine got broken down. Thus, For the last five days, I am traveling from city bus to the office till the time my car gets fixed as I have already sent two days back to repair all parts of the engine. The first bus in the morning comes at 10 am and you know my shift starts at 10:30 am. The time duration takes for coming to the office from my home takes about an hour. Therefore, I am coming half-hour late because the bus comes at 10 am and there are no buses available on my route to the office in the central town before 10 am.
I would request you to please understand the problem I am facing while coming half-hour late for work. If there is any chance to come early, could you help in arranging an office cab for a couple of days till the time my car gets fixed. In this way, I can start coming on time to the firm or if you cannot provide a cab, please allow me to come around 10:30 for the next week as my car will come next week with a new engine.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20462046205 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12250995867 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4554161342 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1625247012 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746632507977 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417717439076 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102162882779 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033843761605 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20462046205 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12250995867 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4554161342 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1625247012 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746632507977 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417717439076 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102162882779 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033843761605 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.38 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.