Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff.
In your letter, you should say:
-the problem due to lack of cafeteria
-how you and your colleagues feel about it
-what suggestions you have.
Dear Mr. Salvatore,
I am writing this letter to request a setup for new breakout spaces in our office building as our staff workers have to go outside to relax themselves during break time.
As you know, we have only one cafeteria with limited seats available on the first floor of our premises. Due to this, we have a lack of space available for all of our workers who force themselves to walk on streets to search for tea stalls nearby our company's building. Besides, it is very unhygienic due to its low quality and poor services.
With the problem of lack of cafeteria in our company, I along with my colleagues feel a bit of annoyed as we have walk far away from workstations which consumes a lot of time and our break limit exceeds. Therefore, we are unable to devote our working hours properly which delays our submission of daily tasks assigned in the form of tickets.
Fortunately, every problem has a solution. Hence, I would suggest you please install a new cafeteria on the top floor of our building which is vacant and available. You can open some of the food stalls along with the beverages shop in the building which will be profitable not only by renting the place but also employees will not be exceeding their break limits. Plus, if we can allow the operation of stall till 9 PM, the evening staff can also avail the facility because they do not prefer to go out far from offices after sunset.
I hope you do understand the above problem and its suggestion.
Yours Sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'walked'.
Suggestion: walked
...eagues feel a bit of annoyed as we have walk far away from workstations which consum...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...h is vacant and available. You can open some of the food stalls along with the beverages sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64944649446 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49351496136 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2243263645 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211361548936 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077607388707 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478414872546 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108117979089 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213270164749 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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