Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing today to complaint you about the dreadful experience of my one-week holiday to Rajasthan, and I would like you to address this issue as early as possible.
Last month, I planned a vacation to go to Rajasthan to visit the beautiful destination like Jaipur, Udaipur, Bikaner, and Alwar. It was a one-week holiday that I booked by calling on your company number and spoked to one of your travel agent. The expense of whole trip costs us around 6000 thousand rupees only that includes travel, food, and accommodation facilities.
Unfortunately, the planned holiday package did not execute well due to your poor services bookings. Firstly, the room provided to us for a stay at my every destination, was not able to complete our needs by providing a functionality of Aircon services, as a result, I felt exhausted after spending whole day by learning about cultures and traditions of different locations in Rajasthan. Secondly, the food was tasteless and unhygienic to my diet. And, due to this, I had to eat at my own expense in good restaurants which was not only hard to find but also were costly on every meal that I had on my entire vacation.
I have attached my costs of food bill which I had spent separately on this trip. Therefore, I would like to get a full refund of the same amount as your company's holiday package served low-class services to me.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8093385214 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78483444413 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7830504174 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165397453479 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570878304719 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570000197566 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942661791211 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426633718319 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.