Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
1- Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
2-Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
3-Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request you two weeks off from work on next month.
I have submitted my application for leave last week to the administration department, but they requested your approval on it. Recently, I have enrolled into a Project Management course at one of reputable centers, and its final exam is scheduled on next month. Therefore, I would request that you allow me this leave to have a good preparation before the exam.
A night shift is available at my current project, and I suggest that I will join it beside the day shift after returning from the vacation. This is will allow me to recover any tasks that would be on hold pending on my leave. In addition, I can organize coordination meetings with my colleagues to boost the work progress.
There were several courses from the same center; however, I chose the Project Management Course for its immense benefits to me and the company. It will enhance my contractual skills which we do need in the contracts while its review during the bidding stage. I can also determine the right terms and conditions in support of our company and organization.
I look forward to getting my application approved.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n approved. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89423076923 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7726341266 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.102378542 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156062156611 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559154812143 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047918109919 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743398501543 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551117397013 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.