Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reason for the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter,
• explain the reason for the noise
• apologise for the noise
• describe what action you will take

Dear Mr Mehta,
With reference to your complaint regarding noises from my flat last night, I’m sorry for the inconvenience happened to you last night, as work in late shift and yesterday happened to be my birthday therefore some on close friends came to my residence to surprise me.
I am really very sorry for the trouble caused due to loud music at late hours in the night. Since this has happened for the first time and even I am also not aware about the same, otherwise I would have avoided such party in night.
I will make sure that this is the first and the last time you are hearing music in such loud volume during night from my apartment. However from the next time I will make sure even if there is any party held at my place it would either be on weekends or with minimum trouble to you.
I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship.
Yours Sincerely,
Pushpak

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...this is the first and the last time you are hearing music in such loud volume during night ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... volume during night from my apartment. However from the next time I will make sure eve...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49390243902 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29212337489 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7705300601 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 4.34317383033 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127541371714 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620174608922 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406472793557 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597644728866 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413511316974 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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