Some people believe online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Teaching methodologies are one of the most affected area due to advancement of technology. There are some who advocate the exclusive use of materials available on net to teach reading to a child, while there are others who chose to stick to traditional teaching methods using printed lessons. This essay will discuss why both online as well as offline methods are important and should be used in combination to provide overall enhanced learning experience to the child .
Online teaching will eventually replace printed materials to learn reading. Some people open handedly accept the online courses for their children to learn reading . Since online teaching provide easy of learning depending upon individuals growth they can move to complex lessons. For example, there are applications available which provide multiple levels of complexity, based on which one can move to higher level at individuals pace of learning. These benefits make online tutorials more attractive and addictive to younger generation.
On the other hand, there are some who want to go with the traditional printed materials like books, newspaper to enhance their child’s reading skills. Physical materials such as books do not have side effects such as eye strains caused by electronic gadgets. Also, given the negative effects, it is justified for parents and teachers to be apprehensive about introducing technology to student earlier than it is absolutely necessary. For instance, reading from books has never caused sore eyes and stiff neck, but reading from PC or mobile can certainly cause these health hazards.
In my personal opinion, a pragmatic rather than hard-nosed approach is the most efficient approach. Both printed as well as online material have their own pros as well as cons, a good blend of both should be utilized to provide an effective learning experience to the child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31313131313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73108410181 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1631894205 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343511323909 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104333746063 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837492112535 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197408661436 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514733034508 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.